The Earth's Future Disaster First Draft

W.A.L.T write a narrative

Success Criteria

I know I will be successful when….

• The title is suitable for the text.

• The orientation tells who the story is about, and when and where the story happened.
• The complication describes a problem and explains what happened next.
• The resolution explains how the problem was solved.
• Include a twist to add interest

The Earth's Future Disaster First Draft

In 1961. In America. Tiki is my Trainer and he's trained me to go to space in a rocket, but I  kept saying that i’m not ready but I’m going, but Tiki told me that  “you are ready to do this.”

Now I'm in the rocket the last thing that I heard was, “see ya in 65 years.”

“But, but you said 5 years” Crrr

“I, I know I just forgot the 6, crr at the front of the 5 Kita.” it's time for the countdown, are you ready?”

“ Yes I am!”

“10, 9 ohm... 5 2 1 Blast off!”

“ I repeat, i'm going through the earth's atmosphere now.”  crrr

“What was that?”

“I'm going through the earth's atmosphere now!” crrr

“What was that?”

“Never mind,”  beep!

I was sent to space to destroy an asteroid. I couldn't find the asteroid I repeat I looking for it but I cant find it, beep beep beep Kita It's to crr late. “ noooooooo!”I'm looking up at the bright glistening bright light from the stars, the brightness and it hurted my eyes. There's no way i’m gonna yawn  zzzzzzzzz…

65 years later…  

In 2026 yawn.

I could see the earth in the distance, I smiled with glee and joy. I’m getting pulled into the atmosphere I repeat Crrr I don’t think they can hear me. I going down, the shuttle is burning like fire, the  parachute pops out. I don't think I going to do a perfect landing, ahh! I’m going to die ahhhhhhh! Bang! I hit the ground.

When I opened the shuttle door I saw a desace, what have I done to America? I didn’t stop the asteroid that was the america is destroyed. “It's all my fault”. I have tears down my wrinkly cheeks. I looked down at the ground. I kneeled down with tears.

Terra firma!  

When I opened the shuttle door I saw a disaster. what have I done to America? I didn’t stop the asteroid, now america is destroyed. “It's all my fault!”  I screamed out loud.

I looked down at the ground and kneeled down with tears.

Then I looked up I saw a ship in the air, I’ve never seen before, then it landed with a thud! It had greens and purples on it. “ Cool I wonder who's in it?”The the door opens with a creek and...  a small fluffy alien comes out with ears with light brown stripes on it’s ears  and with

caramel colored fur. “Ohh she looks so cute.” the deep voice says” I am not a girl!”

Oh  I I didn’t know that you were a boy I'm so so sorry.”

“Oh you Just made me angry.” “Now I'm Going to kill you with Mr Zurkon a family"

"Oh. Mr Zurkon is machine."

“No, No, He is my robot friend hes likes a pain bot.”

"Time to kill time to die time to shoot you in the eye!"

Bang! Bang!

"holey moley you nearly hit me

“Now Mr Zurkons going to kill you.”

“Noooooo!”

Bang! bang! bang!

"Good Try Mr zurkon, you'll will get the monkey next time"

“Ahhhhhhhhhh!”

Bang! Bang!

I am running and running

“I’m going to get you”

I kept running I hand nearly ran out of breath

Then I made a jump for it over the bush.

Smash.

"Mr Zurkon Charge up for the super blast!"

"Super what!"

BOOM!

I woke up with a startle, and I saw out outside of the window, blistering winds that swept through the midnight skies. Then I realized that, It was Just a dream.....