Adverb Comma sentence
Quickly, curiously, Interesting, Importantly, firstly, Often, remarkably, similarly, significantly, surprisingly, readily, happily, sadly, confusingly, consequently.
Example > Surprisingly, everyone was at school on time.
Importantly, do not forget your lunch.
Seriously, why did you do that?
The W-start sentence =
we use it to sound thoughtful and knowledgable
Who, while, whilst, when, where, what, whereas
Example > While the teacher was talking,___ was watching yt.
While I wasn't watching, some on took my pencil
Whilst the iron was left on, It Burnt through the shirt
When we got home, I realized that I left something in the oven
Begin with Preposition
Preposition = a word indicates location or movement.
In, on, at, between, against, over, under, before, after, behind, within, for, throughout, near, about
Example > Throughout the class, the students worked on their writing
Within the school day, I realized I left my lunch at home.
When I got home, I realized I left my books at school
Red, White and Blue Sentence
use this when you need to give more than one idea on a topic.
Example > The idea of racism is memorable in 'The Merchant of Venice' because of shylock, Judaism, and conflict. The essentials of rugby are kicking, passing and tackling.
The ice cream had three flavors vanilla, chocolate, and strawberry.
All you need to is the basics positions in football are defending, attacking and midfield.
Basic Introduction;
Q/R > Quote - From the text.
Rhetorical Question. - You do not have to answer.
T - Title > 'The Merchant of Venice'
A - Author> William Shakespeare
K - Key argument > 1. Describe a key moment that shocked surprised you in the written text. Explain how this money was important to the text as a whole.
Example A key moment that shocked the reader was when Antiono agreed to pay a pound of his flesh to shylock in he didn't repay his bond.
O - Outline> The 3 things you are going to write about. > Red, white and blue statement. = He was willing to die for money to give Bassanio. Shylock and Antiono hate each other. Shylock doesn't show mercy.
Essay Paragraph Example
1. Describe a key moment that shocked surprised you in the written text. Explain how this money was important to the text as a whole.
(Q)"If you wrong us, shall we not revenge" (Shakespeare-Shylock) (R)Have you ever felt like taking revenge? 'In (A)William Shakespeare's Merchant of Venice' a key moment that shocked the reader was(K) when Antiono agreed to forfeit a pound of flesh to shylock if he didn't get his bond. This moment was shocking(R), outrageous(W) and fascinating(B). This (O)moment was important to the text as a whole because Shylock and Antiono didn't like each other but still agreed on the bond, Antonio was willing to risk his life for Bassanio, and Shylock did not show mercy in claiming his bond.
P - Point > The moment when Antiono agreed to the bond was shocking because Shylock and Antiono didn't get along.
E - Evidence > Antiono was Merchant and Shylock made a living lending people money with interest. While Shylock charged interest, Antiono lent money without interest and scorned Shylock for doing so. He also spat at shylock and called him "cut-throat dog."
E - Explain > (How the evidence proves the point) Therefore, the reader is shocked to discover Antiono and Shylock can come to an agreement about money lending. It is also shocking because when Shylock calls Antiono out for the way he treats him, Antiono tells Shylock that he will spit on him and call him a dog again. This treatment is not usual between people who make agreements.
L - Link > (Link back to my ket Argument) With treatment like this from Antiono towards shylock and promise to be just as cruel the future, it is shocking that they both agreed to the bond.
Basic body paragraph #2 Practice
P - Point > Another reason this shocking is because Antonio is willing to die for Bassanio.
E - Evidence > In the Merchant of Venice (quotes)
E - Explain > From the start and to the end of this story Antiono and Bassano were close friends. In the end, their friendship went a bit too far as Antiono had risked his life for Bassano over some overdue ducats in exchange for a pound of flesh from the bond. Bassanio so he could meet his future Wife.
L - Link >
Basic body paragraph #3 Practice
P - Point > Lastly Shylock doesn't show mercy
E - Evidence > In the merchant of Venice
E - Explain >
L - Link >
