W.A.L.T Recall the events through the eyes of the animal
Friday, June 10, 2016
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Hi Tyra, I really enjoyed reading your story about the terrible day. You used some wonderful language that added great detail and I got a really great picture in my head. Next time, do you think you could add direct speech to your writing? Awesome work Tyra, I really look forward to reading more of your upcoming writing.
ReplyDeleteI'd just added the speech part in now Mrs Mclachlan
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