The House at the end...

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Hi Guy/Gals this is a story about a slumber party at an abandon house... This could have spelling mistakes in it.. so let me know in a comment... 

you’re not going to survive this night you’re going to die before u know it…

I wrote this story because I had nothing to do that interested me...

Slumber party….

At school   my friends and I... Got told I dare u and your to stay at the abandoned house at the the end of the street.  Me and my friend’s stayed at this house… abandoned… we brought our devices as using them as lights.. We searched the abandoned house, it was a dare ok…… so me and my friends settled down in the living room, then we heard this voice.. Come here in the shadows, I got some candy…….. I said I’m Not falling for that... are u sure……. Dude… I’m not stupid enough to fall for it. Then he grabbed someone, and covered their mouth and tried to scream, but nothing came out of her mouth we didn't know where she went, we searched the bedroom… we looked high and low… couldn't find any clues…

We searched the the abandoned dinning room, and found nothing… then we checked out the addcik, we went in and said hello is anyone there??? Someone said firmly in a dark voice… I am…….  Me and my friends screamed and ran out the basement,  with a thriller shock… we ran back into the living room scared a horrified.. We had to stay the night it was a true dare we couldn't break, I said (can body hear me talking to myself) we've been trapped here, like we've been a game of tag you’re it…. With sudden deaths haunting us be this man with a deep voice… you’re not going to survive this night you’re going to die before u know it… with shivers down my spine with shock me and my friend didn't want to break the trust of dares…

I turned around with a flinch second on time of the corner of my eye a vase fell the ground… with a sudden scream of shock my friends. I said... a... so ur their and… who’s behind me….. One of my friend’s don’t around… why not… one of my friends put camera on for front camera mode, I could see who was behind me….. I ran to my friends and we hid under the sheet on the ground, with a small light from her phone… we must survive… we must take it all the way until…. The end on the night, we must stay awake… I asked my friend did u bring coffee… and she replied yes…. I said “that will help us stay up late to the end, we must be warriors, and fight our fear to the end… I heard a voice said I’ll cut u up and make you dinner…. With one friend we must find is gone… we found her lying dead. At the entrance of the basement, we fell into tears of sadness, one of friends, what will we do… :( then she rose from the ground with glowing white eyes, and she tilted her head… it was freaky are u ok….

She said… ‘ we must plan revenge… what he did to me…’ we searched the whole house… and searched and searched, the we heard someone laugh of happiness… ‘who’s there????’, I yelled…  I peeked around the corner and I saw… the deep laugher playing with dolls?????, I said… “what are u doing with those dolls???” And he said…. You saw nothing….. > : (  … “ are u sure u where just playing with dolls dude…”               “No No I wasn't…”  I said u should look after yourself at grow up and stop playing with dolls…. These are not ordinary dolls, there voodoo dolls….. >:) what are voodoo dolls???....  Find out for yourself… wh - at did u do to me...,

Why are my hand moving on it’s own?? I essence of each of u.. And put them inside them so… now I can control u… what happens to these dolls and it will happen to u too…..  Noooo!!! Why….. u can’t control me because I’m  dead… I just a soul…. Trapped… I can control your limbs It won’t work the doll would have died too… I’ll try then… w-hat it doesn't work, what happened it should be working… Bad luck… so they went off to the living room… and went to sleep in their sleeping bags, then we woke up with a scream and coffee was gone!!!! I heard sup! Gals what’s hanning…  what happened to your body?? Oh u this thing.. This shapeshifter grabbed me and dragged me to the basement  u know what happens next.. Why… I’ve lost my friends I’m all alone…  WATCH OUT!!!! It’s too late… now what do we do??????? They survived to the morning some how… we should get pay back a haunt her for PAYBACK….. So they flew to school… and haunted for the rest of her life… with whispers  I-t’s a-all your fa-fault n-now where dead cus of u…. Who Said that… i’m hearing things then….  I-t’s a-all your fa-fault n-now where dead cus of u….   I-t’s a-all your fa-fault n-now where dead cus of u….

 I-t’s a-all your fa-fault n-now where dead cus of u….    I-t’s a-all your fa-fault n-now where dead cus of u….    I-t’s a-all your fa-fault n-now where dead cus of u….    I-t’s a-all your fa-fault n-now where dead cus of u….   I-t’s a-all your fa-fault n-now where dead cus of u….

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