WTE: Write a better sentence - Creative Writing

 The simple sentence

The wall was painted a solid white seen from in the distance.

The very short sentence

The car's brakes stopped.

The Power sentence

Lightning is something NOT to be underestimated.

Red, White, and Blue.

the main natural disasters that needed to be looked out for are tornadoes, landslides, and tsunamis.

The adverb start

Shockingly, lightning hit the tree.

Begin with a preposition

Above the fierce storm, there was a calm layer of white clouds

The -ING start

Trembling they were to see if anything was salvageable, from the fire that burnt down their town.

The - ED start

Haunted is something I refused to hear, in that graveyard filled with fog.

The Semi-colon

Terrified, they were to see the results; the results were impressive

The em-dash

The Lykoi ---a natural mutation--- is known for looking like a werewolf.

The W-Start sentence

With the support of backup, they managed to retreat successfully.

Explore the subject

Lykoi, a natural mutation in the domestic cat breeds, has been mutating for over the last 20 years

Emergency kit

The Hungry Wave

For reading our task was to write a Diary entry as if you were Ana, the book we read was 'The hungry wave' by Wendt Young, so enjoy

Here's a video of me reading it out if you don't like reading..... there are a few mistake's like me saying door instead of house srry...

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14/5/2018

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Dear Diary

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  It all started in the morning the worst day of my life… it happened. I was                    

  getting ready for school then this earthquake happened, I fell on the ground, then I stood up. My Mum put a bun in my hair as I wanted braids…  Then I set off out of the house on my way to school…. I looked at the Waves then I realised they were more back than usual then, I ran to the house shouting

Tsunami!! Then I tried to climb a hill but I failed and fell in the water….   

Then after dark the flood got shallower. As I saw house's and car's and even trees left ruined. My family and I sat on the remains of a big hill….                                                

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Our Musical

Red in Hornbyville

For the musical for this term we are, Doing a version of little red ridding hood, I cant wait to the day we preform, so my role is the wolf, and I wonder what the props with look like? as well as the costume I'm not really an actor as you say, because I haven't really preform in front of people :T





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- DLO Sustainability Inquiry

Brief Description: This DLO is about  Sustainability,  Sustainability is about The environment and how Peoples effect it, My DLO is about Pollution from Diesel vehicles, and the effect on things that we need to live for the for the future





Note: Be aware of Mistakes, and This isn't fully Finished Quite yet

I Hoped you'd enjoyed

Never on My Own Part 2

Here is the second part of the story that I made up...

Scroll down the page to see the first part of the story

Monster. . . I walked to the sunset will my journey end, I looked at the corner of my eye, I could’nt see any thing, I only could see a blur.... Then my eyes focused on this blurry figure in the Distance

Hey everyone that's viewing my blog u could give me some idea's if u want is optional, cus I do not know what the rest of the story should be about??

It Jumped at me with a scream of error - tation , The thing went straight through me like a nightmare in a day dream. . . wit a panic shock My Heart was racing, like a Motor bike I didn’t know what to do I slowly backed away then I hit something, wit a scream of shock the blurry Monster, disappeared in the distance. . . I didn't know what to do . . . with tears rolling down my face wit shock. . . “I shouldn't of went on my own”

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Soft Materail

This is the second day of soft materials

This is not what made this is what my friend ruby made for me  it was-int completely done, at the time because we ran out of time in the afternoon at Hornby High tech center.