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Thursday, May 17, 2018

The Hungry Wave

For reading our task was to write a Diary entry as if you were Ana, the book we read was 'The hungry wave' by Wendt Young, so enjoy
Here's a video of me reading it out if you don't like reading..... there are a few mistake's like me saying door instead of house srry...
                                                                                                Story down bellow!!
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14/5/2018
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Dear Diary
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  It all started in the morning the worst day of my life… it happened. I was                    
  getting ready for school then this earthquake happened, I fell on the ground, then I stood up. My Mum put a bun in my hair as I wanted braids…  Then I set off out of the house on my way to school…. I looked at the Waves then I realised they were more back than usual then, I ran to the house shouting
Tsunami!! Then I tried to climb a hill but I failed and fell in the water….   
Then after dark the flood got shallower. As I saw house's and car's and even trees left ruined. My family and I sat on the remains of a big hill….                                                
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  3. Tyra, this is a great Screencastify. You clearly and confidently read your diary entry and the sound quality was excellent. Well done on this reading task!
    - Miss Birtch

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