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My Birthday!!

On the 8th of jan, it was my 12th birthday!! I got out of bed and did the usual, got ready, for the day, had Breakfast. I was Happy - ish i don't know really what I was feeling. Cuz I didn't have a B-day party, cuz it didn't want one...:T Then some family arrived a gave me my birthday presents as well as cards.

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And then I opened them I got, $50, a tent, some clothes and… Chocolate! Yum, the they went. Secondly I got on my tablet/chrome book, it depends which one is charged… A couple of hours later me and my dad drove to the mall, we went to EBgames to find a five nights a freddy POP action figure (Mangle), but we could only find other, FNaF ones,

thirdly my dad and I went to get sushi, and after, we went and got the cakes the types of cakes we got... carrot cake, and the other was banana. Then next we drove home and ate the delicious sushi! 'Nom' I didn't really do anything else, but went on my tablet….

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• I think that I created an interesting piece of writing because… - I enjoyed my birthday I didn't have to o any chores, i got to do anything!! And get anything.: 3
• For next time I could spend more time on… - adding more detail
• In my writing, I would like to improve… - making sense