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Tuesday, May 8, 2018

What in the world is my teacher doing?

We were told to write a story about the teacher that is Made up because she was away...
So I wrote about my teacher being a warrior cat in this story enjoy 🐱

Diamond clan’
SnowClan point of view by Miss Birtch Warrior name (BirtchHeart)
LeafClan
StormClan
WaterClan


Kit/s - Kitten/s
Thunderpath - Road
Freshkill - Dead animals
Paw - at the end of a name means apprentice
Main Chararcter - BirchHeart
Chararcters - Firepedal, Darkstar


On a bright morning Miss, woke up to find herself as a cat  she saw a lot of other cats around her she was surprised she could understand what they are saying then she lifted her head and limped to see a cat leap to the highest rock “ cats of SnowClan, we all meet here today to find two-legs in our territory that are crossing the thunder path make sure they don’t find our camp and be wary of other clans. ” said Darkstar, his fur was all covered with a sleek black coat. After we were dismissed, I saw in the distance to see two cats organising hunting parties, I padded after them then I heard a voice stopping me “ where are you going? “ “Your a hurt cat your meant to stay in the medicine cat den with where all the other injured cats and let Firepedal  help you otherwise you’ll never get better. ‘Okey…’ So I padded to the warriors den, and fell in a deep sleep...


I woke up the next day...

Let me know if it doesn't make any sense or if theres any spelling mistakes

1 comment:

  1. Hi Tyra
    I liked how you created a story that was similar to the Warrior Cat books you have been enjoying. I can see where you inspiration came from! A suggestion for next time would be to add a Google drawing or another DLO you have created to accompany the story! I would love to see what BirchHeart would look like as an animation!
    - Miss Birtch

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