What we read was a story about a boy who had a violin, he disobeyed his mum by taking his violin outside in the public and played it to raise money for a show that his mum and him really wanted to see but they didn't have enough. So he quickly put away his violin before his mum came to puck him up from his uncles music store, but the this boy came running at him he didn't thing it was a threat at first but as he ran by him snatched the violin out of my hand as he chased him till he stopped at a ledge and dangled the violin over the edge, he was going to fast that he crashed into him and the violin fell out of his hands as his favourite possession fell to the hard ground as it shattered into pieces partially, it was still being held together by a few strings... As he saw him mum and uncle standing there as he stood there as he tried to look away as he raced down the stairs to get a closer look at his violin...
Task: Create a sketch on paper of you and your hobbies!
Here is the Results
Kia ora Tyra!
ReplyDeleteI really enjoyed reading your summary of the reading work from last week! You gave great context for the story, but my suggestion would be to make sure you don't switch tenses part way through. You start by describing the boy in the story, then your explanation switches to "I" as if you were the character.
Your sketch of your hobby is very well done and looks nice at the end of this blog post! Keep up the good work!
- Miss Birtch