I am unbreakable is a dance group that preformed in the school. Some acted out dance routeen as some of them were in group and duet's some of the song that hey danced to that I recognised. Each dance had a back story as the danced. As then they talked about emotions as the feeling's you may experienced. They can help out by talking to you about any problem's because they know about these thing through this time, text line if you have a do you need a text? [if you have a phone] - Iamunbtrakeable + Text 5626 or their website thelowdown.co.nz. The lowdown is a Nz Help line that you could go it if needed if you need a talk with them 'so don't feel down feel proud' : D
Hi Tyra, I really like your explanation on I Am Unbreakable. I like how you added a link to the low down because they have two different sites and this one is more important. I remember when they came and danced for us, they also gave us all issue tissues. Maybe next time you should write what you were doing and why.
ReplyDeleteKia ora Tyra! I like how you included your experience with I Am Unbreakable and how they came to perform for us. Just like Trisha said, I think it was good that you included the links and phone numbers to the organization.
ReplyDeleteFor next time try re-reading your piece outloud quietly to yourself. Sometimes we don't see all of our spelling errors but we can hear them when we read to ourselves. There are just a few that I notice in your post. Overall, I think that this is a good blog post that was finished within the time frame!
Keep up the great writing :)
- Miss Birtch