Monday, November 5, 2018
Do Cats make better pets than Dogs?
I agree that cats make better pets than dogs because, the saying "dogs drool, and cats rule," really makes sense to me, and if you disagree with me, then I will try to persuade you to think cats are better pets than dogs then.
One, of the things that make cats a great pet, is that, they are easy to look after. Why? You ask, I'm going to tell. you. Number one, you do not need to give them baths, because they clean their fur with their rough tongues. Number two, is that they don't really need that much food as large dogs, because they are small.
Number three, they do not need extra accessories, like dogs need, Leashes, with a collar and dogs toys all ways gets demolished when they chew through furniture mostly. And cat toys are cheaper than dog's toys. Or they chew their toys into pieces, what a waste of your money.
Number four, when a cat kills a bird, or rat, or a mouse. Sometimes, it is not doing it for fun. They think they are giving you a gift to you that's why, they leave it at your front door for you, or they bring it in the house. You may think its yuck, but they are probably trying to help you like they would in the wild. Nice isn't it? Please don't blame cats for their instincts, they think it is right because they think they are helping you.
They are lovely pets, that why I have four of them. What is your favourite pet?
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Hi Tyra, I really like the explanation of your point of view. You are really good at persuading. And yes if I were to choose a pet, I would choose a cat. You may have spelling error but over all you really did a good job in persuading.
ReplyDeleteKa pai Tyra! When we were going over this topic I could see your excitement to get writing, and you have impressed me! I think you have added in great points about why cats are superior to dogs and I like how you even offered positive ideas around some of the 'negatives' people may have about cats. For example, when they bring dead things home, you made mention that this is their natural instinct and that they should not be in trouble for this.
ReplyDeleteMy suggestion would be to focus on your punctuation. You have some extra commas where they aren't needed, which can be a little bit distracting to the reader. Overall, your point of view was clear and this is a commendable piece of work.
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