Personification
The life of a pink shower gel can.
At first i felt the can it was heavy, smooth, round.
I slowly felt myself when I sprayed the gel on the paper, i felt like the can was realising all the tears out.
Now i feel the can and it feels lighter than before like it has cried out, and all the bad feelings and thoughts had been released through crying.
What was your experience of this activity? My experience was ok, and I guess. I think the activity means to understand other peoples feelings, when you hurt them or something like that.
What did you learn?
I learnt that everything you say or any action you do can effect the other people around you.
Wednesday, September 12, 2018
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Hi Tyra,
ReplyDeleteI really liked your conclusion about what you learned. You wrote a very powerful statement. A suggestion for next time is to remember what formal writing structures we have practiced. I really want to see your writing in full paragraphs, not just stand alone sentences.
- Miss Birtch