18 Descriptive words about a koosh ball
Hooks Ball
Weird feeling, Whiffling,
Stringy, Exquisite, Admiring, Threadlike,
Wiry, Fibrous, Ropy, Stretchy-adaptable, Fun and exciting
Weird-ominous, Smells fresh, Fluffy,
Buoyant, Amusing,
Puzzling, Unique
Hi Tyra! I really how you wrote your poem. You also have a anagram for your title. I think you missed the actual title which should go at the bottom. But overall you did great.
ReplyDelete_Wajihah
Thank you for this thoughtful comment Wajihah! I really appreciate you feedback I would probably fix it soon when I have the time.
DeleteHi, Tyra. It's Summer, yet again.
ReplyDeleteI really liked what words you chose that describe a Koosh ball. One thing you could fix could be to add the item name at the bottom. Overall, I loved the poem.