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Monday, August 27, 2018

Jo Berludi

Jo Berludi - Illustrated by Jeff Gilmour

My Task for reading was to create a blog post about the Story, and to recall the main events in the story, that has happened so far.

The story starts off by intro of the main character, Jo Berludi. - His name is Jonah. Jonah Berludi. Private investigator, Jonah Berludi. Most People call him Jo. Jo's partner is woof his dog. Sometimes at night when Woof is outside Jo lets him in without his mum knowing. For his eighth Birthday, He got given a detective kit. the kit includes binoculars, a magnifying glass, a torch, finger print powder, with a note book and pen. the kit even includes a moustache and cap.

He starts investigating after school. "There is a mystery that could never be solved." As Mrs Pickwick and Mr Pickwick, his neighbours who's, underpants has disappeared off their close line. As he starts to investigate on the missing underpants

to be continued...

1 comment:

  1. Hi Tyra

    I really liked reading your concise recount of what has happened so far in the story! You included the main information about our character, Jo, and his sidekick Woof. Well done! Just be sure to check where your capital letters are. Some of them are popping up in the middle of your sentences. Overall, your writing makes sense and I can see your personal voice coming through.

    - Miss Birtch

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